Music Video Review

I recently watched the music video, "Sweatshirt" by Jacob Sartorius.  The location of this video was in a classroom and the story told was the singer was giving his sweatshirt to a girl.  I learned that in a music video you are going to need more actors than one and also you are going to have to have many angles.  In this video I think the weakness is that the story needs to be told better.  In the end it was a very professional video but needs help in developing the story.